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Wednesday, October 5, 2011

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                On July the 8th of 2005 the Olympic committee voted to drop baseball and also softball from the Olympics. This means that baseball will not be in the 2012 Olympics and might not be in the others Olympics that are coming up. The committee did that decision because they wanted to put other sports into the Olympics. There were 26 choices and from those they decide on baseball and on softball. Does sports were replaced by newer sports.
Contrast and compare:
                On 2008 the baseball teams from the countries were playing on the Olympics games in Beijing, China. Now on the Olympics for the 2012 the baseball teams from the countries will not play anymore. Since the IOC drop baseball from the Olympics games, so know the stadiums of baseball from being crowded with fans now it will be empty and quite. The countries that had a baseball will not be able to participate any more.
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     On an American baseball game it is typical for the stadium to fill up almost all the seats. it was the same thing for the Olympics baseball games. In the baseball games there would be hot dogs, nachos and hamburgers, and sodas and lots more. But since baseball was drop from the Olympics now the Stadiums will be empty and there will be no more cheering in baseball in the Olympics. Now the only thing we can do is to watch baseball in the USA. We might still have a chance that baseball might come back for the Olympics in the future.
By H.B

8 comments:

  1. Good job on your leads but you seem to repeat some things in every lead.

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  2. Make sure you get a thesis in your lead. Dont just say its being cancelled, say that you want baseball back or do you want it to stay gone?

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  3. I agree with the person above.

    Descriptive lead.

    -Chopsticks

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  4. I like the second descriptive because it made me feel like I was at a baseball game.

    -Myka

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  5. Yeah what the second person said just make sure that you get a thesis in your lead. But other than that pretty good.

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  6. I liked the descriptive one the most

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  7. Descriptive Lead, no doubt about it!

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